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Diane Redleaf's avatar

Both the Oswald book and the Mannheimer book have been works of liberation from the constraints of grammar, punctuation, form (though they have their own forms) and clarity that I had thought were hallmarks of good poetry (or which I think I needed to strive for, probably out of insecurity about my own voice). Mannheimer's dislocations and her omissions of detail coupled with the conversation style of her poems helped me to see that clarity and exposition are not necessary and being sparing of details and being inexact can be effective in creating a sense in the reader that they are brought into the story midway and are present there. Oswald moves into a strange place of both time and timelessness, with voices coming out of and above the deep, a sort of pre-conscious/post-conscious ominscience that just seems fascinating and primordial. Both induce a much deeper and seemingly more mystical or liminal sense that is both pleasurable in its own right and also freeing more generally. Poems that I feel emerging after reading these works seem to be both more powerful and more elusive. Maybe I'm wrong.... we are in a realm of uncertainty and confusion and trying to make sense and meaning.

I didn't get that same response in myself (so far) from reading the Mary Leader book --perhaps because her structures are powerful and seem to me imposed upon the work. This could be my own limitation in my own reading.

What are other folks in the group noticing in your own writing after reading these books? I am very curious.

I wrote two very hymnlike poems that must draw something from Oswald since we met. I will try to make these more finished and hope to post one here in the next week for comment/responses.

Thank you Sean for all of this.

--Diane

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Janice Ellen Bressler's avatar

"What do you think about erosion in terms of thinking through poetry?

What is the difference between poetry that prioritizes the human meaning above other meanings in the physical world and poetry that doesn’t?"

Thank you so much Sean for introducing me, us (our reading group) to Oswald and this book Nobody. Your question about erosion made me think of one of her many riffs on what the sea is/does/looks like/means, p. 5 " . . .yet it will outlast everything/because it is deep it is a dead field fenceless/a thickness with many folds in it promiscuous and mingling/which in its patience always wears away the hard things" In your comments, I really like the quote by her about poetry being a kind of "eroded thinking." I wouldn't try to say what she means exactly, but it made me think about how daily routine, headlines, slogans, ads build up on us, on our thinking, like sedimentary rock, and a poem, poems, can wear away that. As for your question about "poetry that prioritizes human meaning," for some reason I didn't feel that Oswald's Nobody prioritizes the sea or shells or water or sea-crows so much as give them voices and eyes and character. But maybe we are talking about the same thing ,the way she gives the sea a voice (really many voices) in the poem, as opposed to all "I" voices that are in so many poems that I read and write.

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